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To support the proposed changes to policy and practice it is felt that a strong influence should be cascaded from the management population.	Managers will need to push the policy changes.
The procedure aims to encourage a dialogue in the workplace between employer and employee about how to meet both parties' needs. Therefore the meeting should be structured in such a way as to allow open two-way discussion about the employee's request.	You should talk with the employee to see if there is a way to keep everyone happy.
If frequent occurrences of sickness absence have been identified, careful investigation and consultation needs to be undertaken with the employee to establish whether there is an underlying problem.	If someone is off sick often, you should talk with them to see if there is a reason behind it.